I'm working on an alternative version of fight club. It's from the point of view of other people who the narrator interacts with. It starts out with the girl checking his ticket at the airport. He tries to be cute with her, she's not interested. It moves along various stops and points of his journey. Mostly people see a tired, bruised, broken man. Then there's the bottle shop where he gets his booze later on. We get to see every single time he goes in. The fat dude at the counter sells the stuff to get what looks to be a vagrant out of his store as quickly as possible. The movie ends when meatloaf dies.